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Friday, 12 June 2020

Writing-Show not Tell

This week our goal was to "Use show not tell when appropriate". Our task was to create a slide or a google drawings to show our understanding of "show not tell". We picked four sentences from a doc to change and added a paragraph of our own narrative to re craft.
Here is my slideshow
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